I feel like I’m drowning in a sea of desperation from within
I want to breathe but I don’t know where to begin
I’m suffocating in the waves of my own regret
I’m trying so hard to remember who I used to be, but it feels like we never even met
My spirit and flesh are always disagreeing
And my heart is somehow always in between
“Do that, don’t do this.”
I accept the temporary even if it’s just a momentary bliss
How can I escape this prison full of lies?
These worldly items I idolize
I know in the end who can make me complete
So, why do I listen to satan’s sweet sounds of deceit?
I’m learning to say no and keep His word close to me
I’m letting go of my foolish desires and letting what He wants take the front seat
I lay my failures at His feet
And it’s at this time, I learned how to breathe
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“For he had often been bound with shackles and chains, but he wrenched the chains apart, and he broke the shackles in pieces. No one had the strength to subdue him.”
-Mark 5:4
I love your poetry, it is Beautiful ❤️
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This poem is amazing, honestly, the first sentences caught me. It feels so real and it’s truthful, we all feel this way at a point in our life. 💕🤓
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Thank you so much!! I really appreciate that!❤️
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Powerful!
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Thank you!
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Been there! Love this poem, and have bookmarked it to read it again.
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Thank you so much! I’m happy you liked it!!
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Desperation and regret, two of the many weeds that can choke the breath, joy and life out of you. Enjoyed this poem and have had that internal battle and drowning feeling many times!
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Thank you!! I’m glad you could connect to it 😀
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This is amazing…
“…I’m letting go of my foolish desires and letting what He wants take the front seat…”
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Thank you, I really appreciate it!
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Wow! When I reread this it was so very well poem. You have a part of life as poetry. Well Done!
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Thank you, I’m glad you liked it!
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Such a powerful and beautiful poem!
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Thank you, I’m glad you liked it!!
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Love this poem!
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Thank you!
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I read that God allows these dark times to come to us to remind us to draw closer to Him. Makes sense to me. I am learning to have gratitude about the difficult times and to see them as opportunities to grow. Not an easy lesson but one worth working on. Beautiful blog you have. hugs, pat, Source of Inspiration
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Thank you for the kind words! And I totally agree with you!
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Wonderful poem Raven!! I truly needed to read that!
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Thank you so much!! I’m glad it could help you in some way! ♥️
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Raven, it was nice meeting you today. Even virtual. I loved the heartfelt words of this poem. It’s so hard to express our soul words found in the secret sacred place. You did a beautiful job. Thank you.
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Wow, thank you so much!! ❤️
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Heartfelt poem. We have a lot in common. I felt every word.
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Thank you, I tried to capture as much emotion as I could. I’m glad you liked it!
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Great poem. It exemplifies my struggle trying balance a better me and who I am.
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Thank you so much, I’m glad you could relate to it!
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This was so powerful, beautiful!
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Thank you, I’m glad you liked it!
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Lovely Raven! Gave me chills. You are a beautiful writer and we do serve a Great God!
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Thank you so much!!
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